Tuesday 3 November 2015

random Tuesday wrighting

This strange place it had no door all that it had was a barf tub and a shelving with some light's with a hose and a bean vine as a certain.it had a concrete floor with meta pip's putting water to the barf and hose to keep the people clean.But the light's are lamps and the shelf is a cubed.
Who doesn't dream of bathing outdoors? But it's also nice to have a nook for privacy.:
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown3 November 2015 at 12:33

    Hi Matthew
    You need to change the spelling of bath not barf
    Good describing words

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  2. Unknown5 November 2015 at 09:18

    Hey again Matthew!!
    It is a good picture to write about and I might ask my teacher if we could write about it next time we write!!
    Your story is also very great and it describes it very well!!!
    You have forgotten some capitals so you may want to read over it?

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