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I Can smell the salt as it slowly go up the beach from the sea.I can touch the palm tree’s strong rough suffice  and the beautifully slowly moved wind. I can taste the salty salt from the sea.The Boat's slowly move across the bay.The sound of the wave’s slowly crashing on the beach loudly.The beach chairs are super soft cushions squash on my back slowly.As i sit the palm tree’s shaded me.

Kayaking

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On Wednesday we went kayaking I got in. Then I remembered and got out and pushed it into deeper water. Then I got in again. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!I was doing really well so I went faster,faster and faster. Then I started to get really good.Then I wanted to race my friend. But we tied! Then me and Yotam were messing around and his one tipped so I tried to flip it back over but mine flipped. BUT when we were swimming back I felt something on my leg then I looked down. I could see a skate so I went faster back to shore. When we got back we had to drain the kayak’s out, it was so hard.

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